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雅思写作中,雅思大作文部分是很有难度的,所以想写好也是一件难事。如果雅思大作文跑题了,肯定不能得到理想分数了。今天小编主要给大家分享雅思写作不跑题的技巧,希望对你们有帮助!
雅思写作不跑题的技巧
1.熟悉可能涉及的话题
可用official guide提供的185个topics,或去下载题库,然后反复阅读题目。
185个topics从雅思独立写作模式上分可分为:
解释现象类:(如解释一下为什么现代人的寿命比以前的长)
对立观点类:
给出两个对立的事物或者一个事物对立的两个方面,要求考生支持一方并进行说明
或给出两个对立事物或一个事物对立的两个方面,要求考生说明二者为什么不同或比较它们的优缺点,并给出理由(Some people like different friends. Other likes similar friends. Compare the advantages of these two kinds of friends. Which kind of friend do you prefer? Explain why.)
185个topics从内容上可分为:
学习类:(如自学还是跟老师学,学广还是学精)
工作类:(如在大公司还是小公司)
生活类:(如食品烹饪便捷是否提高生活质量,如喜欢在家里吃饭还是在餐厅吃饭)
电视电影类:(如电视电影疏远了家人的情感,你是否同意)
消费类:(如花在娱乐上,还是事业上)
环境类:(如政府投入环保的力度是否应该大于投入经济发展的力度)
古老建筑类:(如是否应该保留老建筑)
成功类:(如成功的衡量标准是金钱和荣耀,你的看法如何)
性格类:(如聪明的朋友比幽默的朋友重要,你是否同意)
2.形成自己的答案资源库
熟悉了写作题目之后,就要准备自己的答案资源库了。
自己的资源库要包括:同一类题目的通用观点,有针对性的例证(不一定都要背名人典故,可以从自身取材,自给自足)。这些内容都是要自己去深思,需要有人点拨,才能形成一个清晰的构架和写作流程的。我的习惯就是羊毛出在羊身上,来源于彼,还原于彼。
3.模仿几个好句子
雅思作文中拽句子不用很多,点缀其中,添彩即可。模仿的句子来源,可以是阅读中的复杂句式,先分析长句子的语义功能:它在文章中起了什么作用,是总结,是过渡,是举例,还是因果?那么我在用到总结的语句时,是不是能偷天换日地用上这样的句式? 雅思写作中用上几次之后,这些句子就会变得简单熟悉了。
雅思大作文如何找准中心论点
(一)单边支持/反对类型
提问:Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
范文1:(反对)In my opinion , these subject are not only useful but also fascinating, and it is simply too early for primary schoolchildren to study science and technology.
(二)半支持半反对型
提问:To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
范文2:From my point of view
(三)探讨双方型(可以参考前文“兼收并蓄”套路)
提问:Discuss both sides and give your own opinion
范文3:
1. To my way of thinking , both sides of the argument have their own reasons, and we need a detailed analysis to get to the root of this controversy. 双方都有理,需要仔细分析才可了解争议起因
2. To my way of thinking , both these views can be justified to some extent. 一定程度上都有道理
3. To my way of thinking, both these views contain some elements of the truth, which will be discussed in detail in the following essay.
注:Which 引导定语从句很自然过渡到主体段
(四)分析解决型
提问:
In what ways could mobile phones and Internet be useful to older people? How can old people be encouraged to use this high technology?
→ To my mind
(五)陈述利弊型
提问:
Does the usefulness of this method of learning outweigh its limitations?(advantage = usefulness,disadvantage = limitations)
→ To the best of my knowledge
(六)多重选择型(少见)
提问:
What others factors should be considered? Of these factors, do you think anyone is more important than others?
→ As far as I am concerned
编者按:
大作文的开头一定要注意,可以写铺垫的句子来引出观点,但是如果铺垫的句子和下面引出的观点没有很好的逻辑联系,那么不如不写,而是开门见山的直接写观点句!
例如:
Recently, computer is very popular, therefore computer games at
tract attention of the young. Some people think... , the others ar
gue that... ,
这个句子,划线的部分就很不好,没有必然的因果联系,这样来铺垫开头,不如不写,而直接写观点:
Recently, computer games prevail among the young, which arouses a debate on.... .
另外,以上推荐的大作文开头的一些套句可以使用,但记住,要6 分以上的同学,在使用这些套句后,一定要在套句里面写一些自己的观点、支持,以区别直接使用套句而没有original 内容的写作!
雅思大作文论点角度积累
一、科技和经济
在雅思论文主体部分写作中,科技角度是使用频率最高的角度。绝大多数作文的话题都可以从科技发展对人的生活带来的影响这个角度来加以分析。例如:
讨论是否将动物用于科学实验:
Some scientists claim that experiments carried out on animals would be crucial for potential breakthroughs in treating some of the most-feared incurable diseases.
讨论社会道德下滑:
Development of science and technology has given birth to materialism and capitalism which favor the research for economic growth and freedom of men. Consequently, no spiritual, moral, and traditional values are taken into account.
压力大的原因:
The rapid development of science and technology makes work today more demanding than it used to be.
亲情淡漠的原因:
The availability of a great variety of high-tech recreational facilities also diverts people from enjoying chats with the members of their families.
环保全球化的原因:
Developing countries lack sufficient numbers of qualified scientists and other skilled personnel to cope with the increasingly serious environmental problems, such as the ozone depletion, the marine pollution and the like.
如果说科技的发展是人类社会进步的助推器,那么经济的影响就是社会前进的方向标。经济的强弱通常会导致某一现象的出现或某种结果的产生。比如在讨论什么是最伟大的发明时,考生可能想到电话。那么怎样来支持这一观点呢?试看下面的句子:
The development of the telephone created a new market for the employment of women. The position of telephone operators was most often filled by women, creating a new world of opportunities for females to struggle for the equal rights to males.
通过说明电话的发明使女性获得工作更多的工作机会,从而在经济是更加独力,这对于她们争取平等的权利起到了巨大的推动作用。
二、肉体和灵魂
雅思大作文常会出一些有关科技发明或娱乐方式的利与弊话题。那么不管是写好处还是坏处,考生应该从该发明或娱乐对人的肉体和灵魂这两方面去组织自己的分支观点。比如电脑对肉体的影响:
You don"t have to be a scientist to see that, due to overuse of the computer, a lot of kids get little exercise, which makes them obese.
Another common disadvantage is that playing too much on the computer can cause bad eyesight.
发明或娱乐对肉体的影响主要表现在削弱势力和增加肥胖两个方面,而其对灵魂的影响则涉及一下多个方面。
1.高频率的信息切换影响孩子们的耐性。
There is not deny in that with the advent of technology, our patience grows thin.
2.媒体中的暴力节目扭曲孩子们的灵魂。
Media violence affects children by: increasing aggressiveness and anti-social behavior; intensifying their fear of becoming victims; making them less sensitive to violence and to victims of violence; encouraging their appetite for more violence in entertainment and in real life.
3.对媒体过多关注使孩子们变的孤僻而脱离现实生活。
For lack of face-to-face contact, modern children tend to be more introverted, unsocial, isolated and indifferent than those kids in last century.
三、权利和平等
四方的文化在一定程度上可以浓缩为:权利、平等和自由。中国考生在人们该不该做什么事情或行为的时候应该多从这个方面去说服考官。
如果写到动物的保护问题时,可以说:Animals are not created for humans any more than women are created for men, black for white.
在写到政府是否该花钱来发展武器时,可以说:There is no doubt that the advancement of military technologies is one of the greatest dangers to all human rights, including the most basic right to life itself.
在写到环境的重要性时,可以说:
All human beings have the fundamental right to an environment adequate for their health and well-being.
在写到小孩子是否应该对自己犯的罪负责时,可以说:
When someone turns 18, he or she should be tried as an adult because they have adult rights. Children, however, do not have the same rights as adults do. Then, if a five-year-old child killing someone has been sentenced the death penalty, the trial that determines whether or not someone should be tried as an adult are absurd.
在写到传统的西方道德中对私有财产的尊重时,可以说:
Respect for property is no less important than respect for person. Indeed, respect for property is one species of respect for person. Property is the stuff of personal independence. It is, therefore, an economic foundation of freedom. A society in which respect for property diminishes is one in which freedom diminishes.
四、个人国家
有时候,一个现象或问题的出现是由于个人的努力和汗水或个人的疏忽,以及社会国家重视或政府的政策不恰当而导致的。例如:
运动员是否应该拿高薪:
Athletes sweat and sacrifice physically and psychologically more than the average people, which can justify their high salary.
青少年犯罪的原因:
Young people’s inexperience and gullibility easily lead then into traps. (个人的原因)
The government failing to establish supporting system to offer help to adolescents can explain this social issue. (国家的原因)
在男女平等的意义上使用个人和国家的分析角度也是很有效的:
Every woman is worthy to be respected, educated, and safe from exploitation. It is our responsibility and right to pray, promote, and protect the human and divine rights of all. The world"s stability and prosperity depend on it.
The full and equal participation of women in all spheres of life is essential to social and economic development, the abolition of war, and the ultimate establishment of a united world.
五、文化和道德
文化和道德本来就是雅四大作文中较难的两个话题,而近来这两个话题考的频率又很高。考生不防也从这两个角度来准备一下主体段落的观点。
反对强势文化入侵:
Globalization might undermine cultural diversity. Multinational corporations promote a certain kind of consumerist culture, in which standard commodities, promoted by global marketing campaigns exploiting basic material desires, create similar lifestyles, which is so-called Coca-Colanization.
该不该撒谎:
The dishonest practice of telling lies will produce a perverse impact on one’s personality.